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[19 Oct 2005|01:03am]

kaze_no_namae
[ mood | tired ]

Now - I've done the hard work. My brain is broked. Me think in primitilow word groups now. Someone spork Sues B4 brain turns 2 1N73RN37 W0RD 7YP1N6 l\/lOl)E. . . . .

The new girl

Lookalike

You've Got Mail

Survivor: Jump City (Okay, not REALLY Suedom - but I had to share TT paired up with the Family Guy, ATHF, and YGO...)

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neko - the human cat of DOOM!!!!! [19 Oct 2005|12:19am]

kaze_no_namae
[ mood | crushed ]

Story Or Series Title: neko (actual spelling!)
Culprit Author's Name: RobinBirdWonder
Summary: 'a story about a titan cat... person...girl...just enjoy.chaper 3 is up!' (actual summary - quoted directly from the authoress herself.... >__< )

Full Name (plus titles if any): Kat.
Code Name: ......................Kat.
Full Species(es): Kat-person (<-lame humour), and JAPANESE!
Hair Color (include adjectives): Red magenta
Eye Color (include adjectives): Blue
Unusual Markings/Colorations: Stripes on her left cheek, and a tail
Special Possessions (if any): Broom (she's a witch?), daggers that act like SailorMoon's frisbee,
Slade's Apprentice: God. I'd REALLY pity Slade if she was....she might be in the next chapter. Ugh...


Annoying Origin: Random appearance. Japanese.
Annoying Powers: Witchcraft, though she prefers to fight with daggers... *sigh*
Annoying Connections To Canon Characters: Works for the CIA, and has data on them, I think....
Annoying Special Abilities: Turning the Titans completely Japanese. (She spray paints the 'kanji for neko on her door')
Other Annoying Traits: Bringing trouble to the Titans and being instantly forgiven for it.


Please include a small sample of the worst of this story:

“Who is that?” I asked pointing to the cloaked girl.

“Oh her? That’s Raven. “Don’t mind her… she’s just quiet… and sarcastic. Anyway.” He quickly said changing the subject, “your ‘power’ it’s fantastic! If you don’t mind me asking… how would you like to join the team?”


**

“Okay.” She muttered. “Now go up. I’m hot on a case… well trail.

“On what?” I asked. Then she gave me the weirdest answer I had ever herd.


"MOOOOOOOOOOOOOO-VIE PIRACY!!!!"

**

“Um Robin? Would you like to out with me sometime?” I asked hesitantly.

“Umm…umm I HAVE TO GO BAKE COOKIES WITH SLADE! I mean… STUDY SLADE!” He replied.

I looked over at him, and suddenly an anime sweat bubble appeared over my head. Sadly, I lowered him down and he ran towards the tower.
To drown himself in the toilet bowl, I later discovered. But that was okay! I was made the 'new Robin' then! Whee~~~~~~~~~!

==============

I read this and thought: 'Uhh...Blake's Story is a joke. A parody. Stupid. Why in hell are people want to steal my oh-so-ossum karrickter?'

Yet another day has passed, and I am thankful that I did not create Teen Titans. It would kill me to think my creations were being abused like this... o__oU

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[30 Aug 2005|01:03pm]

kaze_no_namae
[ mood | amused ]

I've seen so many Sue stories lately, that I couldn't help but write my own :3

This originated in a post to bad_rpers_suck as a joke on miss Mary Sue herself - creating a Sue profile - and has become a fully-fleged story. I didn't intend on making it a TT story, but it just happened that way.

The link to the story can be found here: "Yet Another New Girl"

Have fun :3

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[28 Aug 2005|11:35pm]

kibitz
[ mood | bored ]

Bleh...I was just bored. So I actually searched for a fic to post about here. Looks like I found it.

Story Or Series Title: Mystic Angel (How original)
Culprit Author's Name: TheItGurl
Summary: The team meets a new girl with extraordinary powers, and soon she's all that's on Robin's mind. She always saves the day, and manages to bring out one horrible secret of Robin's. But what happens when Slade gets ahold of her?

Full Name (plus titles if any): Mystic Angel (formerly "new girl")
Code Name: Look above
Full Species(es): Human
Hair Color (include adjectives): Dark brown and wavy.
Eye Color (include adjectives): Pretty brown.
Uusual Markings/Colorations: White crystals aligned under her eyebrows.
Special Possessions (if any): "A necklace with a white diamond or something on it."
Slade's Apprentice: Not yet.


Origin: Unknown
Annoying Powers: Can control earth, water, fire and air, flies, and becomes invisible. (If only she stayed invisble) Annoying Connections To Canon Characters: Is on Robin's mind all the time and I think she becomes his girlfriend.
Annoying Special Abilities: She can heal too.
Other Annoying Traits: Winks way too many times.


Please include a small sample of the worst of this story:

You asked for it.Collapse )

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Father's Choice [20 Aug 2005|05:16pm]

kaze_no_namae
[ mood | pissed off ]

Story Or Series Title: Father's Choice
Culprit Author's Name: Gothica13 :: rolls eyes ::
Summary: I’M BACKKKKKKK! OK RAVEN IS INJURED IN A FIGHT BUT WAS IT REALLY BECAUSE OF THAT, AND WHAT DOES BEAST BOY HAVE TO DO WITH ANYTHING?....... Uhm...what? Raven's father takes over her body, rapes Beast Boy, etc. Written by an 8th grader. 'nuff said.

Full Name (plus titles if any): Not mentioned yet
Code Name: Not mentioned yet
Full Species(es): Unsure
Hair Color (include adjectives): Not mentioned yet
Eye Color (include adjectives): Not mentioned yet
Unusual Markings/Colorations: Not mentioned yet
Special Possessions (if any): Beast Boy's DNA (o__O;)
Slade's Apprentice: Not mentioned yet


Annoying Origin: The result of Raven's fatherXBeast Boy
Annoying Powers: Not mentioned yet
Annoying Connections To Canon Characters: Raven's 'rape-child'.
Annoying Special Abilities: Not mentioned yet
Other Annoying Traits: About to live


Full Name (plus titles if any): Andrea
Code Name: Not mentioned yet
Full Species(es): Half-demon
Hair Color (include adjectives): Black
Eye Color (include adjectives): Not mentioned yet
Unusual Markings/Colorations: Purple nail polish
Special Possessions (if any): Not mentioned yet
Slade's Apprentice: Not mentioned yet


Annoying Origin: Lived in Azrath with Raven
Annoying Powers: Same as Raven's, just has better control
Annoying Connections To Canon Characters: Raven's 'best friend'.
Annoying Special Abilities: Ravens, and then some.
Other Annoying Traits: She looks more human because her parents look more human. She is better than Raven because her father was a nice demon.


Please include a small sample of the worst of this story: Hmm, it's hard to pick out specific bits, but I like the lack of descriptive language.

This crap speaks for itselfCollapse )
As of writing this (several months ago), it was unfinished. When my dead brain cells revive, I'll finish it off, becaue part of me I sort of can't wait to see where this heads. I wrote this while it was around chapter 5, or something....now it's at chapter 17!!



Wait..... *decides to check it over* The baby's name is Violet. Wow, she deserves a separate sporking, and all... >____<;;;

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Black Angel [20 Aug 2005|05:14pm]

kaze_no_namae
[ mood | aggravated ]

It's getting to the point that I can't even remember which text files I've posted up here before. >__< Sorry if I'm re-posting old stuff........

Story Or Series Title: Black Angel
Culprit Author's Name: MorganleFay88
Summary: Starfire becomes trapped within Raven's mirror. It's up to Raven and Miss Mary Sue to make sure she gets out all right. Of course, that means defeating uuber boss. RaexBB? I can't tell, the ending is a little fuzzy.

Full Name (plus titles if any): Mina
Code Name: None
Full Species(es): Not really disclosed. At least half-demon
Hair Color (include adjectives): Long, purple colour
Eye Color (include adjectives): Indigo
Unusual Markings/Colorations: Chakra on her forehead
Special Possessions (if any): No
Slade's Apprentice: Well, if that was the 'ending', then I suppose not.


Annoying Origin: "Azarath's princess"
Annoying Powers: The same as Raven's
Annoying Connections To Canon Characters: Raven's younger sister
Annoying Special Abilities: Breathing
Other Annoying Traits: Is helpless when left to fend for herself, but when Star offers her assistance, she suddenly becomes many times more confident.


Please include a small sample of the worst of this story: With pleasure :3

The beginning!Collapse )

**

The plot thickens!!! Like a bad beef soup.Collapse )

**

The end! (all ready??!)Collapse )

If the suethors put some effort into their story, it probably wouldn't be quite as horrible...but they seem to prefer to write three crap stories rather than one good fic. This stories' main problem is that it moves too fast. You can't develop a character (even an established one) in under 1000 words!
The Titans are eating breakfast. This annoys Raven, so she goes to sit on the roof. Starfire takes this oppurtunity to steal into Raven's room, and gets trapped in her mirror. Raven collapses. Beast Boy magically appears on the roof, training. He sees Raven collapse, and the plot advances...for about another 200 words, then it's all over! Smoochy-smoochy~~~~!

<3333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333

:: gags ::
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Beast Boy's New Girlfriend [20 Aug 2005|05:11pm]

kaze_no_namae
[ mood | annoyed ]

Story Or Series Title: Beast Boy's new Girlfriend? Sounds promising, huh?
Culprit Author's Name: babisheep91
Summary: Beast Boy is upset about Terra being turned to stone. He meets a new girl. Falls head-over-heels in love. She's a vampire!!!!!!!!!! OMFGWTF!!!!???????!!

Full Name (plus titles if any): Cleopatra. As in (you guessed it) the queen of ancient Egypt. I would never have guessed if it was not for the suethor TELLING me!
Code Name: Cleo. Thrilling, huh?
Full Species(es): Vampire
Hair Color (include adjectives): Purple hair that reminds BB of a plum. :: gags ::
Eye Color (include adjectives): Pinkish-red. A.K.A. Albino. She gets 'glowing, fierce eyes' when she is a vampire, though.
Unusual Markings/Colorations: ...
Special Possessions (if any): A supply of stuff called Moonic Juice. I guess as a hobby she deals drugs to kindergarteners.
Slade's Apprentice: .........ugh.......


Annoying Origin: Random appearance
Annoying Powers: Mind-reading. Magical growing teeth.
Annoying Connections To Canon Characters: BB's 'New Girlfriend'...
Annoying Special Abilities: The power of run-on sentances. This ability spreads like a disease, and nobody is safe! Cool isn't it because like you know she IS a really ossuhmmmm vampire girl so she should be allowed to do whatever she pleases because if you don't let her she'll suck you dry. If that means defying the laws of speech then so be it!!!!!!!!oneone2
Other Annoying Traits: Terra!Sue, she's got a split personality, and falls for BB


Please include a small sample of the worst of this story: Hilarious comments follow in italics.

Woah, oh my goodness! What a ter-ri-ble story this is!Collapse )

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Try, try, try...and I will suck you dry...Collapse )

**


Flashbacks! OMFG plot advancement!Collapse )

**


Angsty character has a little cry. Boo, hoo, hoo~~~!Collapse )

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Ashes [20 Aug 2005|05:00pm]

kaze_no_namae
[ mood | annoyed ]

I've been neglecting posts here for a while, so I'll be updating a few stories soon. I know this is usually a community to post OC Sue-fics, and laugh with at them, but this story just was too funny to not post. OOC Raven is so tragic.

Story Or Series Title: Ashes
Culprit Author's Name: raven-rocks-the-dark
Summary: Beast Boy is flamed, literally. Raven sees no point in living anymore. RaexBB Death and wanted sympathy abound...unless you don't care.


Please include a small sample of the worst of this story:

Random snippets - with commentary!Collapse )


All in all, this story isn't dark at all like the writer suggested in her summary. I'd class it as a comedy more than anything...

Point. And laugh.

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[15 Jul 2005|06:22pm]

snarky_jargon
[ mood | mischievous ]

I'm sad to say it took me this long just to figure out how to post into community journals. *Sighs* I am a genius indeed.

Anyway. Summer, so instead of agonizing over MCAS, I can... do this. Yeah. I apologize for previous inactivity. Hopefully my snark is still in gear.

This Sue is, I'm afraid, rather bland and generic. Is there some sort of checklist for making Sues in this fandom?


Story Or Series Title: A Spiritual Awakening
Culprit Author's Name: 3rubberband3
Summary: The team, plus Terra, meets a new girl who has some AWSOME powers, if I do say so myself. yes pairings! but the only one I'm telling is RobRae! raiting my vairy from K to K.

Full Name (plus titles if any): Spirit. Weird name.
Code Name: Spirit.
Full Species(es): Self insert Sue. Invincible Sue. Canon warping Sue.
Hair Color (include adjectives): "super long-light brown hair" meaning whenever she fights, she trips over it and gets fried.
Eye Color (include adjectives): "dark green eyes"
Unusual Markings/Colorations: None.
Special Possessions (if any): None. I hope.
Slade's Apprentice: Nay.


Annoying Origin: Orphaned. Sent to a orphanage in a place called "Johnsly". She is OMGBULLIED for being so OMGSPESHUL and superior intellect! Then the orphanage gets bombed, and Spirit is still alive. Being the heartless, cruel psycho she is, she wanders out of Johnsly. A few years later, she winds up in Jump City, defeats Mumbo, blahblahblah. You know the drill.
Annoying Powers: Invulnerability, shape shifting, gymnastics (although if that's a power... yeesh. What's next, karate?), stealth (...not a super power), super hearing and night vision. I think she's supposed to be Superman and Batman's ass baby.
Annoying Connections To Canon Characters: Unrelated to any of them, but it looks like Speedy will be falling in love with her. All the red heads in this fic seem to suffer; Starfire has been... podperson-ed. Actually, all of the Titans have been podperson-ed. Ouch.
Annoying Special Abilities: Invulnerable, impresses Titans with her OSHMORESSUPERPOWERERZ and is a show off. I'm waiting for an OC to try to impress the Titans but wind up in the hospital instead.
Other Annoying Traits: Surprisingly none; Spirit is depressingly bland.


Please include a small sample of the worst of this story:

The bio of Spirit. Everyone, into a bomb shelter!Collapse )

I'll let this one speak for itself.Collapse )

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[11 Jun 2005|12:10pm]

danibel
[ mood | bitchplz ]

'Sup. Besides procrastinating on studying for finals, I just got banned from my favorite server in Counter Strike, so I need a bit of thrashing. Go with it!

Story Or Series Title: Secrets
Culprit Author's Name: chibibatmishu... awww, SUPA KAWAII!
Summary: (cartoon) Secrets are reveiled about the newest titan Blaze as she and Starfire tell about her past... shoujo ai
P.S., combines Teen Titans with Final Fantasy X-2. Ow, my obsession.

Full Name (plus titles if any): Lenne
Code Name: Blaze
Full Species(es): Comes from fabricated planet Pyrion, so that makes her... err... Pyrionese?
Hair Color (include adjectives): N/A
Eye Color (include adjectives): N/A
Unusual Markings/Colorations: N/A
Special Possessions (if any): Starfire's hand in marriage and an annoyingly genderless (code)name.
Slade's Apprentice: No! Worse.

Annoying Origin: A planet called Pyrion, "very near Tamaran."
Annoying Powers: Has the strength of a Tamaranian and her father's, "fire," ooooh!
Annoying Connections To Canon Characters: Is Starfire's loOOoOoOooOVerRrr
Annoying Special Abilities: Can combine two completely different series and create a story similar to that of a G-rated version of The L Word.
Other Annoying Traits: Makes a perfectly decent FF character really queer... and not even in the good way. Oh, and Yuna, Raven, and Starfire, too.

Please include a small sample of the worst of this story:
The story itself is really short (only one small chapter), so you should skim through it. It's a bit difficult, though, since, "Dialogue." "Is." "Written." "Like." "This."

Raven looked up as she heard a knock on the door. "Yuna?" she asked hopefully. "No, its Starfire," came a voice on the other side of the door, "can I come in?" Raven opened the door, "Sure." Starfire went inside and sat down on the chair at Raven’s desk, while Raven sat on her bed. "What do you need to talk about?" "You have a relationship with Yuna, yes?" Raven stared at her, "It's new to me, but yes." "So you wouldn’t judge when I tell you about Blaze and I?" Raven continued to eye the Tamaranian girl. "No, I guess I can't. So, what is with you two?" "Blaze is... Blaze is my 'shmizmar'." "What the hell is a 'shmizmar'?" "She is my 'someone just for me'. The one I want to be with; who I'm suppose to be with." "Why suppose to?" "Blaze ran from me that day on Tamaran. The day of our wedding." "Your wedding? Star, I'm sorry." 'On Tamaran love is a celebrated thing regardless of gender, but where she is from, it is forbidden." "So she ran because of her planet's beliefs. She must have gotten scared, its not your fault." "I hope so. She came here to Earth. That's why I came as well- to find Blaze."

Note:
"Shmizmar," sounds more Jewish than Tamaranian. Har har.

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Oh man [15 May 2005|05:08pm]

kyelle
Story Or Series Title: Amethyst
Culprit Author's Name: Febreese (a multiple-offenser!!)
Summary: A girl, Slade's new apprentice, just shows up. Is she more than just help? What secrets does she know about Slade? And why does Raven scare her so much?

Full Name: Jasmisa Wilson
Code Name: "Amethyst, my apprentice..."
Full Species(es): Um, supposedly part-demon, but I'm thinking more... Rainbow-Brite on crack, maybe?
Hair Color: "long, natural fake-looking rainbow hair"
Eye Color: "color-changing" God, what are those, the mark of the sue?
Unusual Markings/Colorations: Colorations, um, see above. Markings, I don't think were mentioned.
Special Possessions (if any): Don't think any were mentioned.
Slade's Apprentice: Oh, yes. And his daughter.


Annoying Origin: Over the rainbow, maybe
Annoying Powers: "elemental powers" (God, can't anyone be creative?)
Annoying Connections To Canon Characters: She busted up Terra's statue because Terra was mean to her, apparently, and Jasmisa was the one assigned to "feed and water" her. She and Raven have some sort of very confusing freak-out moment just as a solar eclipse moves by, apparently...
Annoying Special Abilities: She's got some severe schizophrenia, as far as I can tell. She hears voices, "not emotions, just voices".
Other Annoying Traits: Plenty.

Please include a small sample of the worst of this story:
goshCollapse )
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It's been a while since I did this! [14 May 2005|10:03pm]

kaze_no_namae
[ mood | amused ]

"Hey! Know I already did a first attempt at this story, but I didn’t like the first one just like most of the other people. So I have tried again. This one is more descriptive and is a little longer. It is almost the same except for who likes Angel. Hope you like it! Titanlvr2005"

And so, we go through this again. The 'original' Angel from Heaven has been 're-vamped'! I thought that since we all enjoyed the first one so much, we ought to see some more!


Story Or Series Title: Angel from Heaven II
Culprit Author's Name: Titanlvr2005
Summary: Well, I'll put it this way. Slade's henchman steal a precious diamond. Some hot chick arrives and stuff snowballs from there.

Angel from Heaven II was the 4th listed story, out of 461 when I searched for 'new girl'!

Full Name (plus titles if any): Angel
Code Name: ...................................................................Angel
Full Species(es): Mercu-arian? Well anyhow, she's from Mercury...
Hair Color (include adjectives): Brunette with blonde streaks.
Eye Color (include adjectives): Blue eyes.
Unusual Markings/Colorations: Wears pure white clothing.
Special Possessions (if any): None so far.
Slade's Apprentice:Not yet.


Annoying Origin: Someone's brain.
Annoying Powers: Seems she can fly, but she can also catch people in Sailor Mercury-style bubbles. Her powers are Light Powers (whatever that means)
Annoying Connections To Canon Characters: Is well read in inter-stellar history. Knows that Azarath was destroyed by Mars. (Huh?)
Annoying Special Abilities: Well, it IS only chapter 1...
Other Annoying Traits: Disabling ff.net's ability to support a well-stuctured and grammatically correct webpage.


Please include a small sample of the worst of this story: Ooh, it's quoting time!

“We’ve got you now,” said Raven as her face went from an innocent Goth-girl look to an evil one.

**

“So, Angel, umm where do you come from?” asked Robin trying to change the subject from Beastboy to her. “Oh I’m from the planet Mercury!” she said with excitement while still looking at Beastboy with an eyebrow raised. “Oh wow! You guys have all the best equipment in here don’t you?” Angel asked while walking from one electronic to another. “Are you guys like teenage superheroes or something?” “Well yea. We try to keep the city safe from Slade and all of the other pathetic villains,” said Cyborg with a smile that could fool almost anyone.

**

“Well yea they are. I am from the planet Azerath. And your powers are bright aren’t they?” “You caught me. Yea I have light powers. Umm according to the empress on Mercury, I could have never met one of your kind because they were all extinct.” As she says this she pulls out a book that says planet history.

**

“Would you like to go out on a date with me? And before you say anything, would you at least take this gift?” holding out the gift hoping that Angle would take it.

Ahahahahahahahahahaa! That one cracked me up most of all! Who the hell is Angle?

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[06 Apr 2005|11:15pm]

evil_dori54
[ mood | annoyed ]

Okay. I'm new, and beforehand, I didn't really care at first to join this community because of the fact that I have my own Teen Titans fan character and I thought it was mean to tear apart a character. But after traveling through FanFiction.Net, and after reading the countless of Mary Sue stories ...I seriously don't blame anyone for getting frustrated and coming here. I don't like how the characters are loved by all of the Titans without doing anything to win over the respect and how they immediately jump into a love affair with one of the original TT characters'. Also, they have to have flaws. It's no fun reading a perfect character and it makes other people who try to make their fan characters tolerable look bad and be hit with a stereotype. They're the kind of characters that should've

I found this story just an hour ago, and I was a bit disappointed with how the character is. The author is good at her writing; she's not a bad or the greatest author that ever lived, but she's alright at grammar and spelling. There's no doubt that the author has a promising future of being a good fan fiction writer.

But it's her fan character that irked me in the end and finally brought me here. Now to get started. I'm not sure if anyone's used this character yet, but I'm posting, anyways, and if the character was already mentioned, let me know.



Story Or Series Title: Forever Lost
Culprit Author's Name: Raveniscool
Summary: A new heroine, Wolf, comes in. Beast Boy is crazy about her, and she actually makes friends with Raven! But a stalker has come in Jump City, and Slade also returns for Wolf… (Clash of BirthmarkxTerra episodes) Oh, goodie.

Full Name (plus titles if any): Wolf
Code Name: ...Wolf.
Full Species(es): Unsure; she supposingly visited Starfire's home planet Tamaran, but she said nothing about being from Starfire's own race. She can't control her "claws," though, for they grow out of her control.
Hair Color (include adjectives): "...brown hair than stopped at her shoulder blades..."
Eye Color (include adjectives): "...dark, brown eyes..."
Unusual Markings/Colorations: None.
Special Possessions (if any): Her leg warmers; they're the only thing that tells her outfit apart from Terra's when the Titans first met her.
Slade's Apprentice: Well, Slade is supposingly after her so I suspect that there's going to be the same Betrayal-Aftershock plot all over again, except Birthmark is somehow involved. (Am I the only one who thinks the Titan Sues and Slade should never cross paths? It's a repeated plot, for Christ's sake.)


Annoying Origin: Our main character Wolf was supposingly was at Tamaran for a while held as a prisoner, even though Wolf strongly claims that she did nothing wrong.
Annoying Powers: She can transform into a wolf (wow, raise your hand if you didn't see that one coming), but the difference is (tada!) she can shape shift faster than Beast Boy. How original!
Annoying Connections To Canon Characters: She met up with Starfire's sister and knew exactly who Starfire was and spoke to her as if she just talked to her, even though Starfire and the rest of the Titans never even met her. She also made Beast Boy blush over... absolutely nothing that she's said or done, but Beast Boy immediately takes a liking to her. And hey, Raven actually likes her off the bat!
Annoying Special Abilities: Her claws can grow out at random without being able to control them. She also had the special ability to make Professor Chang cry, which the other Titans couldn't possibly make him do.
Other Annoying Traits: Wolf immediately interacted with the Titans as if she knew them since they were kids and instantly became a friend. She also seems full of herself and completely flawless, despite her "not controlling her claws from growing insanely and scratching poor Raven's cheek." She also connects with the Titans she meets with on their favorite hobbies, like video games/electronics (Starfire and Beast Boy) and books (Raven), as if she read their minds and knew what they liked.


Please include a small sample of the worst of this story:
We meet TEH WOLFCollapse )

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*hums Jaws theme* [03 Mar 2005|01:15am]

kyelle
Hee hee! sorry, saw this and couldn't resist.

Story Or Series Title: The Wandering Soul
Culprit
Author's Name:
Starchii. Is that like starchy? 'Cause that's how I read it.
Summary:
0 A girl has been wandering around all her life but when she finds a city that actually excepts her will she stay or will she run away from her problems yet again? The producers of TT called. They want their character back.

Full Name (plus titles if any):
Adelle.
Code Name:
Adelle.
Full Species(es): A "demon like Inuyasha". Now, I know nothing about Inuyasha, but this does not seem to bode well.
Hair Color (include adjectives):
Long hair to her mid-thigh. Gray on the top, white on the bottom.
Eye Color (include adjectives):
Oh, Lordy... " My eyes are a totally different story. They are black and I’ve heard people around me that when they looked straight into my eyes they could have sworn they were going to fall in to the depths of my soul. [...] From afar my eyes actually looked like rainbows shining in the sunlight or so I’ve heard."
Unusual Markings/Colorations:
See hair and eyes.
Special Possessions (if any):
n/a
Slade's Apprentice:
He hasn't been mentioned yet.

Annoying Origin: A boy scout named Scottie brought her to Titans' Tower. No, seriously. So she comes in, and Robin tells Terra that she shouldn't bring strangers into their house, and Terra says "But she's hot!" and they forget alllll about it.
Annoying Powers:I... can't figure it out. Something about anger and an Inuyasha demon. She can smell auras, and smell voices to see if people are lying? Crap, I don't know. This is whacked out shit.
Annoying Connections To Canon Characters:  Terra thinks she's hot. Robin fell in love with her after knowing her for a grand total of < five minutes...
 "It was though I had just seen Star hit and falling which probably meant that…No that couldn’t be it I couldn’t be in love with a complete stranger. I love Starfire. Yet in the back of my mind I knew I was lying to myself."
Annoying Special Abilities: I don't know.
Other Annoying Traits: Warping Terra into some crazy bitch... okay, she was already a crazy bitch, but... oh my.

 Please include a small sample of the worst of this story: I had a hard time choosing. the only redeeming part was this line:
“Terra you know not to bring strangers into the tower.” Robin stated as if he were my mother.
But then. that was only because I pictured Robin wearing an apron and wagging his finger at Terra, like, "You know better than to talk to strangers, dear!"


Here it is.. most of the fourth chapter. *barfs*Collapse )

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The Shadow and the Beast [27 Feb 2005|10:01am]

kaze_no_namae
[ mood | aggravated ]

Story Or Series Title: The Shadow and the Beast (I don't know wether it's bad luck, or what, but all of these fics appear to be RaexBB)
Culprit Author's Name: darkangel219. Ooh! Doesn't that just send a shiver down your spine?
Summary: 'Beast boy has a crush on Raven! And Starfire get jealous of the new character Moonlight!' Currently at chapter 3. Unfinished

Stop! You're killing me with your originality!

You really are.

Full Name (plus titles if any): Moonlight
Code Name: None yet
Full Species(es): Tamaranian, Blackfirewannabe!Sue, Starfirelookalike!Sue, Ravenlookalike!Sue
Hair Color (include adjectives): Black
Eye Color (include adjectives): "Amber brown"
Unusual Markings/Colorations: None yet
Special Possessions (if any): None yet
Slade's Apprentice: None yet


Annoying Origin: From Tamaran
Annoying Powers: Starfires, I guess
Annoying Connections To Canon Characters: Starfire's cousin
Annoying Special Abilities: Can piss me off
Other Annoying Traits: Makes Starfire jealous (Sort of like Blackfire)


Please include a small sample of the worst of this story:

EVERYBODY IS YELLING!!!!!Collapse )



This one sentance makes BB sound like a real rejectCollapse )



:P Not gonna put this behind a cut. It's out here and free for the whole world to see!

She never knew anyone would care about her. Then Robins head destroyed her door and he said "DINNER'S READY!"
"HOW THE HECK DID YOU DESTROY MY DOOR WITH YOUR STICKEN HEAD!" Raven
yelled.
Then Raven made a new door that was as hard as diamonds. Then they went out and asked "HOW DID YOU USE YOUR HEAD TO DESTROY MY DAMN
DOOR!"
"Well, Starfire showed me how to." Robin answered.
"Huh?" Raven said.


That's the real formatting. It'll take your eyes out!

Oh, Robin! How can you break through doors and walls with your sticken head? Doesn't that hurt you?
"I don't feel a thing," replied Robin, smiling through his smashed up face, "because the force of the blow completely destroyed my nervous system! Yaay!" And with that, his face fell off, revealing a chimpanzee to be piloting his robot body. The primate lept out of Robin's head, ran across the floor, and exploded.

THE END.

Yeah! That sue-scene just makes me think the suethor ripped Robin from Invader Zim.

"My head is not big!!"
"Yes it is!"

Hahahaaa~! :: runs away ::

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Angel From Heaven [26 Feb 2005|08:56am]

kaze_no_namae
[ mood | amused ]

Hello! I joined this community a few weeks ago now, but I have not been online since that time to make an introductory post. I live in Australia, and I first got into Teen Titans through the GO! TV show, but now I'm branching off into the current DC comic as well. I couldn't pick a favorite character, since each one is special in their unique way, but I do like Starfire's GO! design better than her DC-version.

I'm not a big-head, and "Angel From Heaven" isn't what I refer to myself as :P It's the title of a fanfic I came across through another review here. It's howlingly bad, but still good for "Ha-ha's" and "Hee-hee's", etc. :D

Story Or Series Title: Angel From Heaven
Culprit Author's Name: Titanlvr2005
Summary: "A girl comes in the middle of a fight by a bright light. Who can it be? Flames and comments are taken!" (A.K.A. The fanfic by the girl whose OC was introduced into the earlier-posted sue: The Newest Titans)

Full Name (plus titles if any): Angel
Code Name: She probably reveals it during the "hours on end the young girl told every one about her" XDD
Full Species(es): A human-looking alien from Mercury.
Hair Color (include adjectives): Waist-length brown hair with blonde highlights.
Eye Color (include adjectives): Blue. But then they turn red and turn into flames and stuff...
Unusual Markings/Colorations: None
Special Possessions (if any): Nothing special
Slade's Apprentice: Sort of, but she changes her mind every five seconds. One minute she's beating the crap out of the Titans, then she says to Slade: "I might hurt my friends for fun, but I would never knowingly and deliberately destroyed them. I mean why...how, how could I do that to my own friends."



Annoying Origin: Appears just in time to stop some criminals from stealing a diamond, and the Titans instantly let her join the team. Why do all crappy stories start like this?!
Annoying Powers: "Well telekinesis, flying, healing, mind reading and control, and a bunch of others. I come from a long line of royalty so I get special powers that no one else on Mercury can have."
Annoying Connections To Canon Characters: Even the author smells a Terra-ripoff
Annoying Special Abilities: Every single one.
Other Annoying Traits: Aside from not being able to tell if she's dressed for summer or winter... She's uuber-powered and uuber-hot


Please include a small sample of the worst of this story: Where to begin? The story is, honest to god, just over 1600 words long. 1688 words of crap. I had to format it to make it readable.

Angel's introductionCollapse )

**

Instant acceptance to the TitansCollapse )

**

Angel is all evil-likeCollapse )


The Author's notes provide much more entertainment than the actual story itself: She's asking for flames in almost every chapter. Please fufil her wish XD

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[24 Jan 2005|12:29pm]

snarky_jargon
And it's me, chokotay, on another journal. Too sentimental towards that journal to delete it, so... uh, ja.

This has to be a parody. 3 chapters and barely 900 words... *Shakes head*

Story Or Series Title: The Crimson Girl
Culprit Author's Name: TitansLight
Summary: A girl with every power. My Sue sense is tingling. A group willing to help. a girl with uncontrolable powers. a writer who sucks at summeries. find out what happens... She dies and we all rejoice. Hurrah!

Full Name (plus titles if any): Bethany
Code Name: ...Bethany.
Full Species(es): Lavendrian!Superpowerful!Ubertragik1one!1Sue. And a Sibling Sue, if I read that last bit correctly.
Hair Color (include adjectives): N/A. Probably purple.
Eye Color (include adjectives): N/A. See above.

Unusual Markings/Colorations: none
Special Possessions (if any): A bunch of crappy memories, the souls of the real Teen Titans and Terra's genes.
Slade's Apprentice: Nay. Whew.


Annoying Origin: From the planet "lavendria" (*snorts*), goes off from "Leeko" and goes to "Jum City". Wherever that is.
Annoying Powers: Apparently she has every power. *Shoots self*
Annoying Connections To Canon Characters: Terra's sister.

Annoying Special Abilities: Has stupid dreams.
Other Annoying Traits: Able to be a huge Mary Sue in less than 1000 words.


Please include a small sample of the worst of this story:
You just had to ask...Collapse )</p>
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Sassy Baby Sassy [23 Jan 2005|11:08am]

mmkaythnx
[ mood | nauseated ]

Cower in fear, ladies and gentlemen. I present to you: SCORPIO! *crowd screams in terror*

Story Or Series Title: ExBoyfriend. Fear grips your hearts, don't it.
Culprit Author's Name: SushiChica
Summary: When Starfire's ex shows up, trouble brews. He's willing to do anything to make her love him again, even if it means eliminating the one thing that stands in the way. RobStar RaeBB

Full Name (plus titles if any): Scorpio
Code Name: Ummm. Scorpio
Full Species(es): Tamaranian or Tamoranian
Hair Color (include adjectives): blonde almost white
Eye Color (include adjectives): electric blue eyes (WHY GOD WHY)
Unusual Markings/Colorations: None.
Special Possessions (if any): I don't think he has any...
Slade's Apprentice: Naw at least I hope not. Slade's got better taste than that...


Annoying Origin: Tamaran or Tamoran or however the author spells it.
Annoying Powers: "powerful blue starbolts"
Annoying Connections To Canon Characters: Starfire's ex-boyfriend. Nuff' said.
Annoying Special Abilities: Existing and oh yeah EVERYTHING
Other Annoying Traits:

1. Almost better looking than Robin. (It ain't gonna happen)
2. Smile that could melt a thousand hearts.

Please include a small sample of the worst of this story:

"Will someone answer the stupid door?!" Robin slammed his palm on the table.

"Why don't you?" Raven spat, barely looking up from her novel.

Robin sighed and got up, slowly dragging himself to the door in defeat. It swung open, and on the doorstep stood a boy about the age of Robin himself. His clothes were odd and unfamiliar, dyed in different shades of blue, matching the strange boy's eyes. His hair was blond, almost white. His smile could have melted a thousand hearts.

"Can I help you?"

"Yeah, you can." The boy's eyebrow rose. "Is there a Starfire living here?"

"That depends. Who's asking?"

"I'm Scorpio." He smiled. "Starfire's boyfriend."

Now don't that just make you want to vomit?

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Another day, another Sue... [18 Jan 2005|09:49pm]

thrilloilogy
[ mood | annoyed ]

This author appears to write nothing but Sues. Hope this one hasn't already been reported.

Story Or Series Title: Volcanica
Culprit Author's Name: Febreese (snicker)
Summary: "A girl comes to Titans Tower, but who gives a fuck is she? Compleated." Thanks for the warning in advance, Suethor. Crappy spelling ahead!

Full Name (plus titles if any): Three guesses, and the first two don't count...
Code Name: Initially, she tells the other Titans to call her 'V'.
Full Species(es): All we know from this fic is that she's from another planet. In another fic (yes, this author's written quite a few featuring this... thing) we find out she's a 'Wachovilian'.
Hair Color (include adjectives): Changes from 'limp and brown' to 'red with yellow highlights' It's TrafficLight!Sue!
Eye Color (include adjectives): Red eyes, I think.
Unusual Markings/Colorations: Does her 'short strapless black dress with flames on it' count? It appears to be her 'uniform'.
Special Possessions (if any): None that I can see...
Slade's Apprentice: Eventually, I think... it's not explained very well. From what I can make out though, Slade appears to accept a bribe to get rid of her. Heh. Even PodPerson!Slade can't stand Sues.

Annoying Origin: She turns up on the doorstep of Titans Tower, as per usual.
Annoying Powers: "For you know I have control of fire in everyway possible, I can eliminate it, create it, manipulate it, and even eat it!" Apparently she can also fly and later in the fic she transforms into a 'huge phoenix of fire'.
Annoying Connections To Canon Characters: She's Aqualad's fiancee against her will, supposedly (teh angst!). Becomes Robin's omg!twu wuv almost immediately.
Annoying Special Abilities: Uses sand and her powers to make glass objects. Can make anything out of glass. Manages to defeat Slade with ease.
Other Annoying Traits: How's this? "Volcanica look at Beast Boy with utter hate. She looked at him like he was a piece of shit she got all over her shoe. Then Beast Boy's hair caught on fire. He knew he had touched a nerve." Tsk tsk. All because the poor boy asked if she had a boyfriend. What a bitch.


Please include a small sample of the worst of this story: Really, this crap speaks for itself.

Info Dump and Soopa Speshul Sue Skillz!!1!one!Collapse )

Poor Aqualad. He doesn't deserve this.Collapse )

For extra WTF? factor free of charge, check out this Suethor's bio. *headdesk*

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Oh dear *GOD* [16 Jan 2005|11:36am]

chokotay
[ mood | chipper ]

The attack of the quadruple Sues. Be afraid. Be very afraid.

Story Or Series Title: The Newest Titans (or in which the members of TTSues commit sucide)
Culprit Author's Name: CharmedWitch322. That used to be my fandom, bitch. Stay out!

From the looks of it, she's a repeat offender. *Dies*
Summary: Teenagers with powers join the Teen Titans. Please Read and Ridicule!

Full Name (plus titles if any): Natalie Miller, Prudence Johnson (Charmed ripoff alert), Fire, and Leah
Code Name: None. How stupid are they?
Full Species(es): Wishus!Fullfilmentus!Sue with a lot of canon warping genes.
Hair Color (include adjectives): Natalie: Dark blond
Prue: Waist length black hair, despite having superspeed, which would probably mean her hair would be torn out of her head or get caught in something every time she runs.
Fire: "flame red" hair down to her back. Because we all know that real flames are blue.
Leah: Waist length brown hair with blond highlights. Don't these guys know the hazards of having long hair?
Eye Color (include adjectives): All: N/A
Unusual Markings/Colorations: All: N/A
Special Possessions (if any): Natalie: She has a black "tang top", whatever that is.
Prue: Ditto.
Fire: Red "tang top" and Clay Akien's ugly, red leather pants. Will someone explain to me what these "tang tops" are? Edible, tangy shirts?
Leah: Starfire's spare red outfit. And my infinitely superior OC's name. /ego trip
Slade's Apprentice: No, but Prue and Fire "know" each other. OMGSEKRITS!!!1

Annoying Origin: Natalie: Gets thrown out for having "special" powers instead of having unspecial powers, like being able to make people get Athlete's Foot by blinking.
Prue: Gets her powers in a toxic dump, is kicked out by her roommate for being such a ripoff a Sue for making weird things happen.
Fire: Gets her powers in a toxic dump.
Leah: Pops out of no where.
Annoying Powers: Natalie: Has telekinesis and is a shapeshifter. Ripping off two Titans for the price of one!
Prue: Has super strength, superspeed, and can teleport.
Fire: ...just look at the name.
Leah: Has "powers like Starfire's" and can teleport stuff and people. This author is seriously redundant.
Annoying Connections To Canon Characters: None at all!
Annoying Special Abilities: All: Redundant powers, cliched powers, being canon ripoffs, mangling characters beyond recognition.
Prue and Natalie: Being master fighters without any sort of combat training.
Fire: Knowing a lot about the Titans without meeting them. Ever.
Leah: Being a not!Tamaranean.
Other Annoying Traits: Existing.


Please include a small sample of the worst of this story:
I thought you'd never ask.Collapse )

Prue's intro.Collapse )

Oh no! She's a girl! We've never fought girls before!Collapse )

Leah mysteriously appears out of absolutely no where.Collapse )

liek 0|\/|& dezdind 4 teh p4the fo EVULLLL!!!!!1111Collapse )

At least it isn't a fullblown Teen Titans/Charmed crossover.

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